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  • Name: Sabrine Heiderich

  • Nickname: Saber

  • Basics

    • Base world: Our World

    • Race/Nationality:  White/German

    • Gender: Female

    • Build:  about Average maybe a bit small

    • Birth year: 1911

    • Intelligence (scale of  1-10):  8

    • Strength (scale of 1-10): 4

    • Agility (scale of 1-10): 6

    • Place of Residence:  Traveling in Germany

    • Place of birth: Germany, Countryside Villa

      • Birthday:   some point November - February

    • Family:

      • Older brother: Alfons Heiderich  (Just go watch the movie)

      • Mother: Upper-class beauty. Frail. Rather aloof. Died of TB in 1919

      • Birth father: Rich upper-class, died of influenza in 1916

      • Uncle/2nd Father: Birth fathers brother, marries their mother in 1917. Admiral and very close to both saber and alfons dies in some sort of marine or factory accident) in 1918

      • 3rd father: Married mother in 1918 still alive, not on speaking terms

      • Note: (I spent hours researching. Both of the early rocketry founders Alfons' character seems to be based on had a little sister they were close to.  Other details are also parallel to these two)

    • Relationship status: Single, no romantic relationships in course of story

    • Sexual Preference: N/A probably strait

    • Physiological abnormalities:  N/A

    • Psychological abnormalities:  Unable to get over grief or show the extent of it to the outside world

  • Appearance

    • Skin color:  pale but not extraordinarily so

    • Eye color: A mix between Eton, Cornflower, and Duke blue (look up shades of blue on wikipedia

    • Hair: bright golden blonde as it is presented on this site: (www.blonde-ambition.co.uk/blon… but with elements of a tiny itty bitty bit darker gold. worn lose down to lower back and a bit curled but not all the way so more wavy looking

    • Scars: probably a few here and there

    • Clothing:

      • Main outfit includes white blouse, (long or short sleeved depending on season) red neck ribbon, brown mini jacket, and cream two-layered skirt.

      • Also has other outfits but most are hard to describe

  • Likes:

    • Fairytales/fantasy
    • Stories
    • Dancing
    • Ice Cream
    • Drawing
    • Water color
    • Dressing up
    • Making other people dress up

  • Dislikes:

    • Hess
    • The currant state of affairs
    • Getting too dirty
    • Dusty dirt
    • Nights

  • Key personality traits:

    • Eccentric. Saber doesn't think like your average person, XD This trait has become a bit less obvious as she's aged and realized how other people tend to be, but its still there "Super powerful X-ray Telescopes!" Lol sorry inside joke….

  • Drives:

    • What Saber wants more than anything is to finish what her big brother started and die in the process. She wants to get both the Elric brothers back to their side of the gate so she can feel closure, like her brother's death want in vain. After that she has no clue, she had never imagined life without Alfons. And can't really deal with the concept. Her brother's death has jolted her out of her childhood and exposed her to the harsh realities of the world. In a way Saber does not have the ability to deal with them.  

  • Beliefs:

    • (religion and such): Christian but not religious

  • Skills and Talents:

    • Basic:
      • Her mind,  Like I said before Saber is very eccentric, while this can lead to awkwardness it also gives her the ability to come at things in another way and think of things no one else would.

      • Art, Saber is talented in her artistic abilities she loves do draw and paint watercolor style. She keeps her sketchbook with her at all times and will sell art while on the road to earn a bit of cash

    • Athletic:
      • dancing, Saber is light on her feet,  flexible, and coordinated, so dancing comes natural to her

    • Weapons/combat:     

      • Spirited, the only thing Saber had going for her in this department is that once she gets in a fight she'll fight with a lot of chutzpah and it not above biting her opponents if she thinks it will help. other than that she has no skill with any weapons and hasn't been trained in any martial art so yeah…

    • Survival skills:

      • Banter, Saber is good at striking up conversations with all sorts of people.

      • Barter, Saber is good when it comes to playing the Barter game this comes in handy as Ed is fairly predictable, Al can be easily taken advantage of, and Noah is at a disadvantage due to her heritage


Oh gosh she sounds like such a sue...

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:iconholycowworshipper:
Well the fact that you spend hour seaching should take away a massive amount of any possible Mary Sue-ness!

D: WOOOOW. I didn't know Wiki had all the colours with those names...
I have Cronflower blue eyes, apperantly! :la:

I really like the "Drives" part! It's very believable! Also, the fact that she has no love interest in any of the Elric brothers makes me happy, it's a nice change!
This part too "Her mind, Like I said before Saber is very eccentric, while this can lead to awkwardness it also gives her the ability to come at things in another way and think of things no one else would." - Great connection to her eccentricity, and a good way to turn it into both something bad and good!

I don't think she sounds Sue-ish! I'm looking forward to more!
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tansyuduri Oct 25, 2010  Student Writer
oh good I'm almost near being ready I'm woried about learning to write noah...
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:iconholycowworshipper:
Yey! Except I will be confused about it being first anime, but oh well!
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tansyuduri Oct 25, 2010  Student Writer
have you seen the first anime? if you havnt i can give you a link
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:iconholycowworshipper:
I've seen it once, but forgotten most of it.
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tansyuduri Oct 27, 2010  Student Writer
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:iconholycowworshipper:
Bookmarked! Thanks!
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tansyuduri Oct 28, 2010  Student Writer
sure... um could you tell me what you think of my latest journal entry if you dont mind? ^^;
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OsZys-Scrapyard Oct 24, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
eh, not too bad. Not the most exciting, but not bad...
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tansyuduri Oct 25, 2010  Student Writer
I didnt want any spoilers...
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